Haiku.

Letní voda Tvá,
stříbro stéká po těle.
Slunce vysoko.

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Your summer water,
silver flows down the body.
Sun high above us.


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Snažil jsem se dodržet pravidla o psaní haiku, nakonec...nejsou žádná pravidla, není co dodržovat, není proč se snažit.
Jen Ty.
A jen obraz lesknoucí se vody v záplavě slunečních paprsků stékajících po Tvé kůži.

Banální básnické haraburdí známé od 19. století. Banal poetic junk known since the 19th century.

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Read and recorded in Studio Shaark
Banal poetic junk known since the 19th century.
/To Milan K./

Lubomír Tomik

 In the raunchy neighborhood of Edo
 the sound of wooden sandals
 crosses a stone bridge.

 Her eyes,
 she has a light canopy of sorrow draped over them.

Edo – Wikipedia

Banal poetic junk known since the 19th century.

The title of the poem is from prof. Milan Knížák, Milan Knížák – Wikipedie (wikipedia.org) years ago he gave me a nice slap in his words, I needed her, thanks. Thanks for You time. These are his words:

„You use banal poetic junk known since the 19th century.“

Time …. a word.

Thank you ….words . But sincerely.

And after Your criticism, I wrote this poem…maybe special haiku.

Try to capture feelings. …..How does a sales woman feel?